How my final products differ from my original submission

As I decided to resubmit my coursework, I completely remade my blog to suit me and be more conventional. When I first attempted I thought I should stray from convention and make an alternative rock magazine, however this was not as successful as it could have been and my final product was of a lesser quality than it is now. For this resubmission I completely stuck to convention and make my product more basic yet attractive, which would likely be more noticeable on the shelf of a store.

This is my first attempt at my magazine. As you can see my colour scheme has changed completely, going from something dark that could easily be hidden on a shelf to something much brighter. Another issue with my first attempt was that I used all f the same photos for each page; this does not show variety within the magazine itself and was something I made sure to change with this new version. My work was not high quality images and the text was pixelated unintentionally which looked unprofessional. I also didn't rely on audience feedback when making it and so didn't know if it would even be a popular magazine, but with my new attempt I have made it for the readers.