Acknowledging my feedback from the first draft, I have:
- Changed the font to be more readable, organised, and match the rest of the page
- Organised the margins
- Added writing to the top of the right hand side page to keep the double page spread linked
The page now looks fuller and more realistic as a magazine's double page spread.
Showing the same market member, here is feedback I have received:
Make it slightly smaller/further apart and potentially bigger margins on the sides of the text?
if it was made into a physical product, how would the lack of margins in the text affect the readability?
apart from that I actually LOVE it
the greys and whites are a good colour scheme and then it's got the massive red stuff which really draws your attention
and I like the headers and the images
I would potentially move the page number to the right hand side, just cos that's the "normal" (conventional) format
Again, I will now respond to my feedback and improve on a final draft.
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